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I’ve always preferred writing in first person because it feels more personal and immersive to me. However, I found it limiting in terms of perspective and narrative freedom. After doing some research and reading other novels, I noticed that many of them were written in third person—and they...

You can comment on chapter also.. Yeah, actually you could say, the name is inspired from seirei gensouki.

Any advice on how to deepen the emotional impact of the scene. I updated chapter 4 and i tried making it emotional and i am quite confidence that i did great. but can you point out the weakness on it. Chapter 4

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Thank you for the feedback. I’ll definitely keep it in mind. As for the length, my goal is to pace the rom-com elements a bit faster so I can introduce the main twist earlier and create a story that stands out from traditional rom-coms. Ok, I would keep that in my mind..

I just posted Chapter 2, but it ended up being pretty long. Is that a turn-off for you as a reader, or is it fine as long as it’s interesting? Would love some honest feedback on the chapter — pacing, writing, anything that stands out Link: Novel

This isn’t my first story. I’ve loved writing since middle school, but that passion grew even stronger when I entered high school ( mostly influenced by other authors and the way they bring their stories to life, which I truly admire. ) But as always I always write few chapter and abandon it...