Alright I understand. Thanks for giving my story a try and for sharing your honest feedback :blob_aww:I appreciate the time you put into it.
And sorry for the disappointment :blob_pat_sad:
Thank u so much for taking the time to read this far and also give a feedback. :blob_aww:
It seems like you didn’t like her personality. From what you said, I’m not sure if it came across that her behavior might actually be an act, so that might be why it felt annoying. :blob_hmm: Does it not...
Is this still open? I can see [OPEN] :blob_evil_two:
I’d like feedback on mine too :blob_aww:
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1941664/beneath-the-crown/
Omg Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and share your feedback. I really appreciate the effort and attention you gave it—it truly means a lot to me. :blob_hide::blob_salute:
This is my first time writing so I’ll listen to u and definitely work on the points you mentioned and...
Omg thanks a lot the memes had me laughing and smiling for no reason :blobrofl: thank u for spending ur time reading and giving a nice heart warming feedback.
the best so far I guess:blob_gift::blob_aww:
omg thank u so much, i'll fix that part like u said. my story leans more to tragedy not comedy. so i felt the beginning should have a few comfortable and funny parts so later it can hurt much more.:blob_hide:
Thank u so much for the honest feedback. And the time u took for reading and typing all this.:blob_aww:
alright I'll fix everything again soon. As I had to fix the beginning chapter once I at least reach 50.
Thanks a lot i am glad you enjoyed it and sorry for the uninteresting parts or which...