Recent content by SenseiHusky

Can you guys review it I meant my last post asking for a review e

Rise of Tenzing: Teaser A small dark drop of blood slowly dropped onto a floor stained with blood, where corpses laid lifelessly ... .Meanwhile a group of masked militants unzipped a bulky black duffel bag stained with blood on the bottom, they removed the metal sheet hiding the contents, what...

Should I feel proud or sad

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Is my story good as a plot Ducks are goats, my husky salutes them when he sees them

My bad guys

"Misspelled 'Viscious'. Great. Unnecessary 'which was', textbook learner. And what's with the double dots?? You don't know what that's for, do you? This is better rephrased, seriously. And add comas where they belong, you dipshit. He wore a white shirt, stained with deep viscious red liquid, has...

It isnt viscious it is viscous means thick and sticky; not flowing easily

Ok

Can you draw 1 thing for free or nah

Ok diss me Arc 4: The rise of Tenzing. Teaser A single dark drop of blood falls onto a floor filled with corpses. Meanwhile, a group of masked militants take out rifles from a duffel bag with stains of blood. A young man with a clean shave, neat hairstyle, and a neat tuxedo is walking...

I I just need some help, I dont like it when I work very hard and people diss me

Not anymore

Aw what could i do to make it better I am a new author Nobody helps me, so i am on my own....

Its meant to be visual