Sense of numbers!!
They senselessly jump from 3-5 to 100s, and then millions and billions.
It could be no.of soldiers, or distance in kms...
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Many of them suddenly start over-exaggerate things a bit too much...
1. Annoyingly stupid MCs, even deuteragonists and big-villains being stupid turns me off.
2. Repeated overuse of same lines.
3. Too many mysteries in short amount of time, like an info dump. ( I come here away from those research papers, I don't want to see one here)
4. Dragging on things more...
Use AI to do a quick-edit, basically fix the spellings and major grammatical errors. It'll experience better for new readers.
However, old readers don't want any kind of efforts wasted on something they already read.
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If there is a good amount of new readers comming, then author might give it a...