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    I offer free feedback. (Closed)

    I'd be grateful to take you up on that offer, the novel is in my description!
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    Tea or coffee?

    Green Tea! Anything else is just lacklustre in comparison
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    New cover! How do you think of it?

    What I was about to say! That website is amazing for art, lowkey a sick tool
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    Would love some reviews or comments on my novel!

    Your novel sounds really interesting, so I'll check it out now. In exchange, I'd love for you to read/comment on some of my chapters here. No pressure, though, as I'll read yours either way :] My Novel - The Condemned Child Genres: Fantasy, Action (Battle Academy)
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    I'll leave a review on a story of your choice in exchange for some comments on mine.

    I'd be grateful for the opportunity! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/469953/the-condemned-child/
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    Writing Telling too much information.

    Haha, I think I may have been the person who said the story you mentioned was good. Thank you for your advice, Master Gryphon! You're right, mystery boxes are crucial, but they're so hard to write. Do you have any advice on making a compelling one? For example, Satella's narrative was really...
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    Recommendations School-Life Romance with a non-loner male protagonist

    Thank you guys so much! Will read both promptly <3
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    Can someone have a second look on my synopsis or first chapter?

    I enjoyed it, though I'm a sucker for litRPGs in general haha
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    Coolest scribble OC?

    Ishi from 'My New Neighbour's an Idol' is pretty funny, I'm a pretty new reader though.
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    Recommendations School-Life Romance with a non-loner male protagonist

    A lot of the male-protagonist romance genre has MCs like Hachiman or Oreki, who are quiet/loner types. Although they're really fun, I've read too many novels like that by now so I'm over-saturated! Does anyone know any School-Life romance stories with a different or more unusual MC?
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    Silver-white hair.

    Silver-white hair looks cool on anyone, no matter gender or age haha
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    Would you read further?

    I liked the first chapter! It was interesting, and inspired me to read more later - Like you said, the main issue was Grammar but that's something that will come with practice, keep it up! :]
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    Feedback On My Novel (First few chapters)

    I think my first chapter is holding me back. I've written four chapters over the last three days, so I'm not expecting many views or anything, but my fear is that everyone who has read the novel only reads the first chapter. Resultantly, I was hoping to ask if anyone would be so kind as to read...
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