Your novel sounds really interesting, so I'll check it out now.
In exchange, I'd love for you to read/comment on some of my chapters here. No pressure, though, as I'll read yours either way :]
My Novel - The Condemned Child
Genres: Fantasy, Action (Battle Academy)
Haha, I think I may have been the person who said the story you mentioned was good.
Thank you for your advice, Master Gryphon! You're right, mystery boxes are crucial, but they're so hard to write. Do you have any advice on making a compelling one? For example, Satella's narrative was really...
A lot of the male-protagonist romance genre has MCs like Hachiman or Oreki, who are quiet/loner types. Although they're really fun, I've read too many novels like that by now so I'm over-saturated!
Does anyone know any School-Life romance stories with a different or more unusual MC?
I liked the first chapter! It was interesting, and inspired me to read more later - Like you said, the main issue was Grammar but that's something that will come with practice, keep it up! :]
I think my first chapter is holding me back. I've written four chapters over the last three days, so I'm not expecting many views or anything, but my fear is that everyone who has read the novel only reads the first chapter.
Resultantly, I was hoping to ask if anyone would be so kind as to read...