Recent content by SallyAdomelieu

Thank you for the response, I see your point about the story focus. Knowing a reader's perspective on the main genres is good; I'll take this advice with me as I continue writing. PS: Your feedback office was very entertaining and insightful.

I'm new to writing out stories and posting them. I am hoping to get feedback on what I should continue doing and what I should be focusing on or just find out if the story is coherent overall. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1272211/the-accounts-of-an-ordinary-bookstore/

I am fairly new to the community and looking for any advice on my work. Let me know if you have any ideas on improving my work or even questions to help me find what I need to flesh out more. Even if you just have an opinion on which character you find to be most entertaining, I'm hoping to get...