Recent content by Sadisticshades

I'd say just focus on what you wanna say first, then figure out how to word everything better afterwards. I'm the type to just message the second I think of something so sorry if this doesn't help

Oh nice! Hmm, is it possible to switch around the POV order then? Assuming that the mc's pov isn't related to anything the other character says, you could have it go: POV 2, POV 1 then finally POV 3 where POV 1 notices them. Eg: they see a group of hooded figures shrouded in darkness...

No offence but I’d argue three is too much, if possible it might be worth switching the POV to the character who’s inner monologue is the ‘most valuable’ and have them check out the other two’s reactions/ expression. Saying that idk what the context is so mb if this advice is useless. Also I...