I see. I would like to thank you, your excellency, for the constructive feedback. I will also ensure to thoroughly iron out the inconsistencies you mentioned. It honestly widened my horizon. Once again thanks, and advance happy new years to the chicks!
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Please give me some of your insights and your thoughts about the story. (It's only at the beginning. But its quite long so it's almost 2 chapter or more. The first instance of the novel is going to...