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Rosica replied to the thread [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated).At least make him relive his most depressing memories to make it more anime. -
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Haha.
The chapters are short, but the narrative clutter is too much. What casual reader would want to read two chapters just to watch MC stand... -
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Well, they were quite short chapters. :sweating_profusely: I'm willing to give most stories a shot
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well, it doesn't help that the first minute of reading has this pattern three times. it's the most famous/obvious ChatGPT pattern, the...
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You read 10 chapters for this kind of narrative?! Too crazy! :blob_pout:
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Maphilindo still lives
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To much fat, i prefer lean meat.
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Rosica replied to the thread I'd like some feedback on my philosophical and slice-of-life story..I don't know enough about Jesus's dad or student councils to decide if the characters are realistic or not. All I know is I like how the...
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As you requested, I'll be honest, too honest, too blunt. I'm giving you feedback as you requested. Are you upset with my initial...
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Rosica replied to the thread [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated).They read like a single chapter split to three. More chapters can give you more exposure, but it won't help you get readers if the...