Recent content by Rookieqw

Atlas Shrugged. The author genuinely believed that the wealthy could exist without ordinary people and prosper, instead of resorting to self-bickering and backstabbing over nothing. Check the RL experiments of such societies. If the CEO of the railways disappears, the people will simply choose...

Hi! Before we go on, keep in mind, I'm a very bad author. Treat any of my advices or opinions with care. With that out of the way: I take it you are a non-native English speaker? So am I (I'm from Russia). So, the first hurdle here is that English-speaking (or folks reading in English) people...

Thank you. This is a huge flaw in my writing. While I can't do much about the poster, I'll try to improve synopses to the best of my ability.

Good day to you all. I hope you are doing great. My current story (https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2259089/born-to-be-a-monster-decided-to-be-a-human/) isn't doing so well. I haven't received any comments (, so I don't know what the matter is. Could anyone check it out and tell me why it's...

You are a better author than I'll ever be, so I can't help you in terms of grammar and story. Keep going! But people had taught me that the readers like when the chapters are named, not just numbered. But before implementing it, ask your fans!

Hello. Before we begin, keep in mind I'm the worst writer around these parts, so take my advice with a grain of salt. First things first, fix your grammar mistakes; the readers are literally asking for it: Cyan Star, a planet that shines like a jewel in the void of space, is one of the few...

Good day to you all. I need to know if the epilogue is readable (in terms of grammar), if there are enough descriptions, and if the characters' emotions feel natural from your point of view. If you have the time, please tell me your opinions:

Hello! Keep in mind, I'm not a very good writer, so take any of my advice with a bag of salt. With that out of the way: Just ditch the sound and voice. Try: I was singing by the riverside when a splash interrupted me. The last part is cute if the kid is young enough. I feel that "I" would...

Yes. Many readers will skip it, even if it is very well written. Better to split it into 2K or 3K chapters.

Good day to everyone; I hope you are doing well. I'm learning how to become a writer and would appreciate your help. Could anyone please read this chapter and let me know: Are the descriptions detailed enough? Do the dialogue, characters' motivations, and behaviors feel natural? Do I overuse...

Hi! Keep in mind, I'm not a very good author, so avoid trusting my suggestions. So, here's the first thing: No need to mention orc twice. Try to use "burly brute" or "towering figure." Any reason not to use the more classic: His eyes shimmered like polished topaz from behind a black operatic...

Hello! There's a spoiler tag (at the end of the first post).

Sorry to bother you, but I need help. I'm finishing my current novel and beginning to work on my next story. Could you please tell me: 1) If the text is readable. 2) If I don't overexplain stuff. 3) How bad is the dialogue? 4) Is this a bad way to start a story or a not-so-poor way? 5) If...

Thank you for your kind offer! Here's my current story https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1950602/overcome/ My goal is to earn comments (not money or anything like that). So any advice on how to improve to earn readers and their interaction would be awesome.

Hi, there! Keep in mind, I'm a rather poor author, so take any of my words with the grain of salt. With that out of the way, let's go: Too much info. Veiled fury, desperation to vent... go for a simpler fuming with fury. Or remove "she was desperate to vent" (we already can guess this much)...