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Dude, honestly... I'm having a hard time visualizing your scenes. Your narrative is full of verbs piled up in a compound sentence...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2204924/beast-heroes-roxys-rebirth/ I've improved the writing format, but i still want to see what...

It really wasnt intended for a general audience, I write primarily to sharpen my skills :D As for the atmo, I can agree with trimming...

First off, thank you for your time! And I can see the issues, chapter 2's length came about because I had scenes in my head and I was...

Thank you! I appreciate it.

Thankfully, I'm very unapologetic and I don't care how successful someone is or not. I'm also lazy. So here's my quick, unbiased...

Thank you! I'll keep that in mind!!

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2188101/the-young-masters-maid-talks-too-much/

You are a better author than I'll ever be, so I can't help you in terms of grammar and story. Keep going! But people had taught me that...

Honestly... I have no comment. Your fiction is already quite competitive in SH's trending (mine doesn't even deserve a mention). If you...

I see. I guess my opening chapter is still weak. The lack of tension is indeed what bother me after i go back to it. I kinda want to...

I read almost halfway through the first chapter and got bored. First, it's clear English isn't your first language. The fact alone...

Your chapters are like giants, dude. My advice is simple: break them down into smaller chapters. For example, Chapter 1: Chapter Title...

What's up, guys? I have finished my exams and tests on both school and online. I have returned to check what's happening while I'm out...