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I'll skip giving feedback on characters since I'd need more to work with than what is shown to comment on characterisation. SPaG: There...

Goddamn! Why you don't draw directly from draw pad bro?

Thank you, I'm glad you like my arts. I just draw figure that pop up on my head, haha Raw Sketch + Shading and Coloring using Corel+PSD :

Oof, I thought that more blunt description would be easier to understand and I removed some environment details because I thought the...

Dragon figure :

Day 8 : Lining with 0.5mm pen.

For some reason, your writing here feels like a First POV forced to Third POV narrative. Like Eldoria and BernKatstel suggest, for third...

I gave it a read. I mostly agree with what Eldoria said: there’s a very distinct lack of description and immersive writing overall. I...

Honestly, dude. In terms of writing style, I prefer your old prologue. The old prologue had a solid narrative. The scenes were very...

Hello, I tried to rewrite my Prologue for my web-novel : Battle Mage. Please give me your thought about the content of my prologue. Any...

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Honestly, I feel like crashing someone else’s wedding is way more awkward than using a nickname 😄 But yes, I understand what you mean...

Yeah i understand that actually, since my first novel using the pet name "Tiger" that trigger emotional tension toward the MC. Again...

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and share your feedback, I really appreciate it 🤍 You’re absolutely right about...

Dude, are you really a beginner? This kind of spatial posing is hard to sketch!