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Hi, if you don't mind please review my work. I need some feedback about my writing: ad finem amore I'll drop the synopsis and the prologue.

I went straight 100% autopilot after 5 glasses of Old Tennessee.

Honestly, I don't see any significant differences between the 3 versions of this chapter. All chapters have a similar characteristic...

Okay so i missed the reason for the backstory trigger in chapter 2.

Maybe you can make context or plot each chapters first for 10 chapters? So your plot will not stray too far when you write it. And you...

okay i think i understand why you feel like that. @Daeron I wanted to know if you were able to feel the transition between the flashback...

odd weapon? :blob_hmm_two::blob_hmm_two: a drill? whip? or.. stone?

Depend on your intention or context, but i felt like losing the plot at chapter 2.

I think this is my own personal taste, but i feel like the story plot breaking at chapter 2. Chapter 1 about arena, using short...

It looks like my teacher back then at elementary school, hahahahaha

That's just my overactive imagination. :blob_joy:

It's fucking better, ngl. I swear the title and the characters are what I remember from this cover now.

Those are really good. It's not just the quality either, but the expressions that fit with the titles. Like, you can see how their faces...

Whoa, you really guess it completely spot on regarding first and third image! Thank you, that means my message delivered. For second...

Thank you, for your input! I already try create some more minimalist style art for past few days, and using some photoshop edit for the...