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Ehh, I really feel like this is just a level of experience you need to have. Frankly, I just have umbrage with "deep" being a new word...

For me, Art is about how much soul you pour it into your craft. The writing might not work as an art if you're forced to make it. So, if...

It is actually refreshing idea. The plot about personality detachment, resentment between reality and the expectation, and you finish it...

This is a complete short story (4 chapters), not a serial. I’m specifically looking for feedback after reading all four chapters...

yeah, as Eldoria said, it's about the immersion. And for me it's still very hard to apply it, HAHAHA

That's just show don't tell, no? I think I wrote like that sometimes, gives the reader more expression to imagine. Though, I should...

Don't oversimplify the issue. Deep POV isn't just about showing. Deep POV is about high-level immersion. Do you know the narrative...

Deep POV is a writing style that immerses readers directly into a character's experience by removing all narrative distance between...

Ah thank you, good point regarding "I". I didn't think about substitute it, I'll try different approach about it. And for the chapter...

This is just personal taste 4 "I" opener, I don't like, unless it is there for a poetic aesthetic, if there is I didn't like it enough...

Not necessary, The context is about : The MC is typical Delusional-Narcistic-Self Absorbed Young man. He's living together with his...

So, i tried to improve my writing by improving my Deep POV approach. Since my story already reaching the main Psychological Thriller...

Mine literally Delusional-Narcistic-Villain MC, HAHAHA

Chapter title Lightly Basted With Sweat And Saltiness or Cookin' With Lasers Context - My MC just had his first battle in this new...

Cookin' with Lasers better. Or if i may suggested "Blazing Light" or "Over-heat"