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    Character Feedback - Read chapter 7

    I had so much fun writing this character. Im hoping for some feedback on if the character and the chapter land alright. You can just read it by itself, Its the characters first scene. Thanks! Oh! There are bad words. So if you dont like those, maybe skip it. lol. Chapter is called Salt in the...
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    I will try a different approach. My story is terrible and requires much criticism and open mocking.

    Oh. I see... Nope... No I don't lol. You are way beyond my level. Thank you for posting that awesome link though!
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    I will try a different approach. My story is terrible and requires much criticism and open mocking.

    Perfect you guys get it! I don't get it. How did you do that cool thing with my book and stuff. @Empress_Omnii :oops:
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    I will try a different approach. My story is terrible and requires much criticism and open mocking.

    It's hopefully not that bad, but you gotta do something to stand out in this forum. lol. Thanks for any views this actually brings. I always appreciate feedback! Or mockery. My book is Skyburn. Please check it out.
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