Recent content by RiloCree

Tysm. I've never had such a detailed critic on my story and you've really given me some helpful insights on what i need to improve. The idea does have some potential, but yeah, there's no motivation, no tension, nothing to engage the reader. You've read through the lines and yes, that was...

I'm a very new author knowing almost nothing about how to write stories. Please torch my creation as best as you can. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1374077/stars-of-gerhana/