hello thanks i greatly appreciate the feedback, and will try to change the way it's written I've actually recently did rewatch the film silence of the lambs and Red dragon I'll make sure to check out the book for reference, i wanted to make the next chapter about the sin Wrath and will change...
Hello everyone, i wanted to atleast finish the second chapter before asking for a feed back as the chapter one and two are the only chapters that would have a connection, but I'm really curious on what others would think or it's for someones taste at all, I don't mind if you say it's no good at...