Recent content by ReiHayashi

I shall make my offering: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1101435/the-best-revenge-is-becoming-a-villainess/

Hello again! I've done my best to apply what you'd highlighted in your previous feedback for my edits, and I think I'm pretty satisfied with how it turned out (altho it added an extra 10k words to my draft at one point :sweating_profusely:) I'm now humbly requesting for another roast on the...

Haven't even started writing this story beyond the premise, but I would like to hear your thoughts! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1581628/in-four-days-i-will-die/

Hmm maybe it's just me, but I feel like you are repeating a lot of stuff in your synopsis that are already pretty obvious at first glance (eg. "once-prosperous" already implies that the land now is in chaos and stuff, so the sentence afterwards feels redundant). Another thing is that "navigate a...

I'll just leave mine here :blob_melt: I don't mind if you do mine last, just trying to gather as much feedback as possible so that I can better edit my story when I'm done writing it all out

Thank you for the feedback! I must confess, I'm a pantser by nature so the finer details like pacing is whack :blob_hide: but I'll do my best to polish the story up once I'm done writing~ I'd def appreciate it if you can continue giving feedback on the rest of the story!

The god has replied! AYO it's been almost a year and you are the first person to point it out, I don't know what to say :blob_hmm: (I'm mortified oops) I agree, I've been trying to use the butler to edit but somehow I feel like they are just messing with me most of the time so I haven't done...

Me, me! Please stone my story (mostly because I'm still waiting for the god Tempokai to roast me) :sweating_profusely:

carefully

oh sheet :sweating_profusely: i didn't know that...

Not to say that there will be no smut in the entire story, but I'm still a noob when it comes to writing sex stuff so I've been procrastinating (shh...)

Tysm! It's the reason why I put a 'Comedy' tag for my story :blob_evil: There's zero smut so far LMAO it's kinda of a running gag at this point (it's a slow burn :blob_popcorn:)

Here's my take on a well-known cliche in one of my chapters: I'm sure some webcomics do this too, but basically you can let certain characters break the 4th wall and have some fun with the readers :blob_uwu:

Love your reviews, I offer mine as the next fresh meat waiting to be roasted :blob_hide: The Best Revenge Is Becoming a Villiainess

Just posted my first story on this site last week, I read up on some of the tips posted here and tried my best to follow them (using a cover, popular genres etc) but I have a hard time gauging if my story is going to be a success or not. All of the comments I've received so far are also super...