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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    If you have time... Please disregard the second half of the prologue. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/580900/the-philippines-in-a-fantasy-world/
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Thanks for that! ? I guess I need to rewrite it. "She was the national security advisor, Claire Carnas. And not only that proposition is out of place, someone who isn't an economist talks about economy." Food security and economy are also components of national security. I thought it should...
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Wherever you prefer :blob_cookie:
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    Where evil triumphs

    Overlord, I guess? Momonga is actually quite a villain if you look outside the perspective of the MC.
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Hello! If you have time, please... https://www.scribblehub.com/series/580900/the-philippines-in-a-fantasy-world/
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    Promote your story here!

    It is about revolution stuff. I'll be uploading every week. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/507261/the-wealth-of-ophir/
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    Free Constructive Review(closed)

    Hello! If you have the time, please review and rate this. Thank you. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/507261/the-wealth-of-ophir/
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