He was polite and then you blew up on him.
I'm pretty sure doing that in real life would get you beat up or something. In the work place, you'd get reported to HR.
A normal person would have just asked for a clearer explanation. It would have been easier to type too.
Maybe the reason you got...
Hello! I'm not an author, but since I wasn't doing anything particularly important, I decided to give this a shot. Don't expect me to get technical though. I'm going by feel here.
Overall, the grammar is good. I didn't have to pause to rearrange the sentences in my head, which already places...
Please. Please do this for me.
A sweaty and blushing Raiden Shogun wearing a maid uniform while licking a 5 inch eggplant.
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I prefer to be on the reader side. ☺️
Plus it feels like I'd just make a power fantasy self-insert that I'd end up regretting a few months later cuz I put all my deepest darkest desires into it...