Recent content by Pumah

Here's my review: I don’t have a lot of time on my hands right now, but I managed to read the first 2 chapters. For the most part I actually found it a pretty decent read. The concept as a whole is unique and and sets itself up for an interesting series. There were a couple of grammar mistakes...

Ill do a review swap, let me know if you're still interested in getting feedback!

Understood, I'll start again.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1392988/the-dragons-strongest-gift/

I made the cover for my light novel, I want to see everyone's thoughts.

Lol, @HiroXV is a funny guy! My story is simple but in my opinion an easy read. If you like the idea of a highly revered and renowned dragon teaching a child he found in the forest how to master the elements. Then this book might actually, be your speed...

I love to reread my work, but I also find it to be a deeply rewarding challenge. I find it hard to like the stories I write because that means I have to reach my standards. I write what I want to see, but sometimes it is hard to execute the grand vision that was in my head. The loving comes in...

Made a story called 'The Dragon's Strongest Gift' and I would like some feedback. (It can be ridiculously harsh I don't mind.) To prove it I'll go first. Pros: I personally think that the story is an easy read, delves into themes about the essence of a gift, loneliness, perseverance and...

Can you roast mine, please? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1392988/the-dragons-strongest-gift/