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    The Last to Comment Wins

    You failed. :blob_hide: And I'm more so a long time lurker that decided to make an account, than a newbie.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Endless spam: the thread? :blob_hmm:
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    Shower Thought #3 - The idea of gaining invisibility is cool, until you realize you would go...

    Shower Thought #3 - The idea of gaining invisibility is cool, until you realize you would go blind. Light would pass straight through your eyes.
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    But are you awake?

    But are you awake?
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    The Word Chain Game (Shiritori)

    Ketamine
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    Dear Diary, Today...

    A community diary? feels like passing around notes in class or writing on each other's yearbooks. Dear Diary: I never understood why it was customary to start off addressing you as if you can read and understand what I say. You, are not real. You are merely pieces of tree flesh glued and or...
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    Thank you. I do possess high quality, endless philosophy in my mind at my disposal

    Thank you. I do possess high quality, endless philosophy in my mind at my disposal
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    Shower Thought #2 - South Korea must really like pepsi to make it their flag.

    Shower Thought #2 - South Korea must really like pepsi to make it their flag.
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    What terrible images being presented to me.

    What terrible images being presented to me.
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    We don't need AI Slop illustration [RANT]

    AI slop implies the existence of AI gems.
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    Thank you, people of animals and insects. I am people of windows 95 computer.

    Thank you, people of animals and insects. I am people of windows 95 computer.
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    I don't know if I should feel welcomed or call a certain hotline.

    I don't know if I should feel welcomed or call a certain hotline.
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    Pacing Issues with my 2nd Arc

    Well, let's think about it this way: Do the chapters repeat the same thought without any new development? Is Herald actively navigating with the conflict, or just walking in circles inside his head? Does each chapter add a new fresh coat of paint? - (new info/lore drop, emotion, decision, etc)...
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    Incorrect. Permanent reservation for myself only.

    Incorrect. Permanent reservation for myself only.
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    Wondering if my Story Description (Hook) is weak or strong...

    Slightly conflicting tonezees here, shifting from a casual sounding opening and playful, to heavier, desperate even. It makes me wonder if this is meant to be more introspective and emotional? Or a bit self aware with dark undertones? Def-eez could some tightening, I agree with the person...
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