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Ay. Easter's coming up, and you're in the perfect place to celebrate. -
Puffikki reacted to SouthernMaiden's post in the thread Wondering if my Story Description (Hook) is weak or strong... with
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I would suggest, shorten it. Make it a bit punchier. Possibly split it into three paragraphs. Also, first sentence seems weak. Hit me... -
Puffikki replied to the thread Wondering if my Story Description (Hook) is weak or strong....Slightly conflicting tonezees here, shifting from a casual sounding opening and playful, to heavier, desperate even. It makes me wonder...
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For earth day this year let's all bury ourselves underground idk i think it would be fun lol
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Puffikki reacted to Krawallsternchen's post in the thread Would love some feedback on my story with Like.
Hi there! I only started writing in English for the first time in ... ever. So I'd love some feedback from you more natives :) I do not...
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My Nickname is "RiceCooker717", but you can call me "#1". Joke. My hobby is creating story and using my imagination. I actually created...