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If @Doctah_Quack is 2 years away from your age 20-2=18years 18=my age after 11 days according to my almost precise (Jee level...

I suspect she's still sleeping by turning off her alarm...for ONLY 20 MINUTES more

Just tell the people to put the images in a spoiler

Thank you for your feedbacks. I will make the necessary changes

Nowadays, I'm lazy to get up and go to the barber...mainly because barbers here have no parking space where I can dump my motorcycle.

I wanna play the block game. I yearn for the mines!

1. There's a lot of telling instead of showing here. Like, a lot. You could give some kind of example, like your character trying and...

@Tsuru Indeed, I'm still figuring out about the behavior here. Including the cover taste! hahahaha Still, for now my priority is...

Try writing from a limited third POV first. If your narrative can provide a limited third POV through the protagonist, it will be more...

What a WISE OLD MAN

So for the time above changes? and should I remove the description of Mc and all?

I actually have a lot of criticism... but I don't want to burden you with too much criticism. I want you to focus on solving the most...

I've seen enough hentai to know where this is going...

So the issue is only with POV, right? For the old chapter I had got a review like MC is not really well explained So I added that...

@Playerkartik Thank you! I tried to be better.