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    Is my action scene easy to follow, or am I overdoing it?

    It is chapter 46, the most recent.
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    Is my action scene easy to follow, or am I overdoing it?

    I recently posted a new chapter for my story "A Second Chance To Ruin" on Scribble Hub, and it includes my first attempt at writing an action scene. I’d really appreciate some feedback, especially on a few specific things: Does the pacing feel smooth or rushed? Is the action easy to follow...
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    Story feedback Request

    I am a new writer and i want honest feedback on my WIP story. So far I have 42 chapters and i have much more in store, but i want to make sure I'm doing everything right so I'm reaching out. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2116848/a-second-chance-to-ruin/ This is my first time doing...
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