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That’s actually a really good piece of advice — and when you think about it, it really does make sense. I’m sincerely grateful for the food for thought, even though I had considered it before. The only thing that pushed me to publish the book on websites was the fact that knowing someone is...

Could you point out exactly where I was too hasty with the lore? It’s actually because of this that I can’t reveal most of the nuances in the descriptions yet — I’m gradually unfolding all the best parts. This also relates to the length of the prologue, as each Top, depending on the number of...

Hey everyone) I’m looking to get some solid feedback rolling on my story “The Promised Continent”. The prologue is fully finished, and I’d really appreciate your thoughts on it. If you leave me an honest review, I’ll read the first 10 chapters of your story and give detailed feedback in...

I’m new to this platform and would really appreciate some honest feedback on my story. The prologue is fully finished, though the rest of the story is still ongoing. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1747681/the-promised-continent/