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Thank you for your reply! The narration change is a good idea if I handle it well. I'll see how it sounds in my head and if it fits with how I write. I kind of see what you mean. Using a limited third-person POV seems viable. I still have some work to do to really differentiate the characters'...

Hi! I'm a novice author and I started posting my web novel a few months ago. I had already written one before, but I didn't like the format anymore, so I rewrote almost everything. With the new format, I prefer to write the chapters in the first person (usually the main character, but with a...

Tried another approach for my first chapters, I did my best to fit the webnovel style without betraying my writing style. I felt like the narration was way simpler (too much sometimes) and I guess I like it better this way. Though it's still a bit long. It's so hard to convey what I want in...

I'm currently working on my novel but I will give it time this week end. However, I'm still a beginner so my opinion should be taken with a grain of salt.

Chaotic in what sense? Like the events or the narration? I see what you mean. I mean it's still the first chapter and it is supposed to be a really long novel (at least 100+ chapters) but maybe I should tease what it implied. I understand, I tend to use LLM or translators sometimes. I'm still...

I changed my novel to fit the Webnovel format a little better. I'm looking for feedbacks and advices for the future. Any opinion and feedback will be appreciated. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1823395/kikai-unmei

It's a shame because that was really my intention. I've always loved writing in the ‘light novel’ style, because in my mind that's how I want to tell my story. I didn't realise that the difference with the webnovel style was so great... I'll see if I can find an alternative as long as it still...

When I write, I use Japanese honorifics because I find them revealing in terms of certain relationships between characters, or as a linguistic tic. Does it really sound strange when you read it? If so, I'll see if there's another way to change it. However, I don't really understand the...

I need some help with my novel. I wrote the first chapter several months ago, but the more I read it, the less comfortable I felt with it. I found it long and lacking in impact compared to other novels (not that I think I'm as good as others). I then came to think that from a reader's point of...