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I skimmed the rest of your chapters, and I think my main takeaway here is that lack of tension I mentioned earlier. Good storytelling...

Need a link dude.

My Appraisal: Well Done

Darkness took me, and I strayed out of thought and time, and I wandered far on roads that I will not tell. Also I was sleepy.

A werewolf who reviews takeout and their channel is called I'm Lycan It.

Oh... you're back. Your patient's been waiting for a long time, dude.

Okay, so many thoughts about this. Starting with "a man" rather than a named character isn't great because your opening should attempt...

... What a weird way to advertise your web novel

Trying to dodge the 'AI'/'mindless comment' tag, huh? Thanks for sharing this.

Recently joined user, and they've posted variations of this comment on a bunch of other works including the dreaded "lets continue this...

Casting characters to me is like saying Imma grow up to be princess when I was 4.

I cast them instead.

Jesus Christ, this makes me want to reach for a rape whistle.

Hi Bayleyroskstar, Your thoughtful words mean a lot. One of the things I’ve always believed is that stories carry a responsibility...

Hi Leslie, welcome. Nice to meet a fellow English on here - I'm on the southeast coast, though, so nowhere near Yorkshire. It's very...