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    At least I am just one day late with the chapter...

    At least I am just one day late with the chapter...
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    This maybe futile, but I take the lead once more.
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    Free AI Images

    This is quite amazing, thank you! I feel for the artists, but it seems this generation of images has itself become ... something like an art? Since I still haven't got enough traction to commission hand drawn images, I hope you won't mind if I use them!
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Ob la di, Ob la da, Life goes on, BRAHHH LALALA how their life goes on.
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    We had to make a profile? :s_eek:

    We had to make a profile? :s_eek:
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    He's not the messiah, he's a very naughty boy.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Whilst thou speakest in Emoji, I employ some spear shaking language.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I throw my glove within this gauntlet.
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    Why should I read your novel?

    You will read and read, but will little think What wealth my words to you will bring. For often, when on your couch you lie, In vacant or in pensive mood, the lines, the characters, the events, may flash upon your inward eye, which is the bliss of solitude. And then your heart with pleasure...
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    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Oh chick of the interwebs, I leave my meager story for thy pickings. Pick what thy will. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/952326/the-conqueror-of-night/
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    I will read your story and give reviews. (I am OatMush's disciple).

    I may only read one chapter, in the interest of time. Currently, I have a huge backlog. As I haven't read your story long enough, I would not be able to review it on the story page. On comments and posts here, I shall. But, otherwise, I feel it will be an unfair review.
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    I will read your story and give reviews. (I am OatMush's disciple).

    I shall definitely go through it. I did glance through the first chapter, and so far, it's been a charming dialogue of two young boys, and rather bad teachers. Unfortunately, I'm swamped with year-end work. I will get back to it as soon as possible. But, you are in queue. So, it might be after...
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    I will read your story and give reviews. (I am OatMush's disciple).

    If you want to discuss in a little more depth, you can DM me always!
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    I will read your story and give reviews. (I am OatMush's disciple).

    Hello! I read till chapter 5 in your novel! That's awesome, but that's because your language is great. However, right as I started, I felt the texture of the language overshadowed what was being said. What I mean is that I found it to contain so-called "purple prose". It's difficult to power...
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    I will read your story and give reviews. (I am OatMush's disciple).

    Right on! I'm doing yours right now. LMAO, didn't know there would be so much smut. But, I will give a review!
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