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WAAA! Dont let him be a loot goblin! Protect the ancient words of glory!

Hello, so I am currently making a story called Urban Valor, and I need help with how to write Action. I would like to say I am proficient at imagery and emotions, but I don't have a clue for the combat scenes, my brain teh and the words just don't match at all. I am reaching out to ask for...

I was certainly bedazzled by that sentence. You seriously don't want that smell. The imagery is *shivver* not helpful :sick:

I’m currently getting around 40k word I currently have half or 10 chapters published it’s called Urban Valor so help you Thank you for the comments and for the cover look. It is currently a temp, and I have an artist with an official cover on the way. For the weaknesses, I completely understand...

for the first 3 chapters its omniscient 3rd POV but will switch to limited 3rd afterwards

Thank you!

Hi everyone, it's a pleasure to meet you. I'm a newbie author, and I'm announcing my first series! its called Urban Valor and currently has 2 chapters and a 3rd on the way, I hope you give it a read! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2249744/urban-valor/ I would love to hear your thoughts on...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2249744/urban-valor/ This is the link to my series that I am writing. I have currently published chapters 1 and 2. The front cover is being drawn, and I have hired an artist. I am looking for feedback from you, the authors, on any major mistakes I may be...

So thank you for such a great take on my chapter and all your questions are really good pointers too. That will all be explained in future chapters on why he kidnapped them, why is he not killing them, and if you notice there is no perspective from his side truly? Pacing wise thank you for...

Salutations to the citizens of this world. I require your services... begrudgingly, my services are not well received in my world; thus, I have looked for new outlets to gather views and found you. What I require is very simple. You, the recipient, shall partake in my subinorates creation, in...

This is the first chapter of my series, I would like criticism on how major errors I might have made, and your opinion on how well it is built. ( https://coda.grammarly.com/d/Urban-Valor-Chapter-1-rough-draft_ddhpLyQTrFu PDF file here as well ) PLEASE READ Haven't used scribble hub format, so...

No worries that has been completely redone! No such cliche or boring scene will happen at the beginning that would now be a disservice to my villain Also I have posted a new thread regarding chapter 1 on my introduction as well

Alright I have completely rewritten it thank you so much for the feedback that helped a lot on my hook and introduction and I’ve made a new thread regarding it if you would like to look

I made the first chapter of my story and want to know what you readers think of it. It is currently in production, but I want to share the introduction to see if it would hook you guys. I am open to constructivite criticsm. Chap[ter 1] "Let The Show Begin" [Light City] Sitting on the East...

Finished my introduction. This is only the intro, I need to write the combat tomorrow, never done it, so wish me luck. want to get your thoughts on it. (PS NOT heavily edited yet) [Chapter 1] "Let The Show Begin" [Light City] Sitting on the East Coast, the ultimate destination for Business...