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Hello, so I am currently making a story called Urban Valor, and I need help with how to write Action. I would like to say I am...

I was certainly bedazzled by that sentence. You seriously don't want that smell. The imagery is *shivver* not helpful :sick:

I’m currently getting around 40k word I currently have half or 10 chapters published it’s called Urban Valor so help you Thank you for...

Well, I'll highlight one strength and one weakness of the narrative. Strengths: The atmosphere feels alive in chapter 1; the city feels...

for the first 3 chapters its omniscient 3rd POV but will switch to limited 3rd afterwards

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Hi everyone, it's a pleasure to meet you. I'm a newbie author, and I'm announcing my first series! its called Urban Valor and currently...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2249744/urban-valor/ This is the link to my series that I am writing. I have currently published...

So thank you for such a great take on my chapter and all your questions are really good pointers too. That will all be explained in...

I think the main issue for me was pacing. The opening blackout scene has a strong hook, but it feels a little too extended before the...

Salutations to the citizens of this world. I require your services... begrudgingly, my services are not well received in my world; thus...

This is the first chapter of my series, I would like criticism on how major errors I might have made, and your opinion on how well it is...

No worries that has been completely redone! No such cliche or boring scene will happen at the beginning that would now be a disservice...

Alright I have completely rewritten it thank you so much for the feedback that helped a lot on my hook and introduction and I’ve made a...