Recent content by PancakesWitch

Yeah because most readers drop stories whose plots they cannot predict because they feel alienated by it and unsafe. Readers want the story to go how they think it should go. This is why crazy endings, plot twists, or beloved characters dying is so hated by readers, they dont want the story to...

Your problem is that you assume I cannot write big paragraphs, what I do is by choice, not because I cannot do it otherwise. There are many of my books with long paragraphs fitting for conventional books. You're just talking out of your ass because you don't know a thing about who I am. People...

not always, I dont really treat AI as a person so I dont ask it for feedback or talk to it, to me its just a tool, and I can't think of its feedback as valuable because it is merely geneated from data taken away from the internet. I just ask my readers on patreon.

read action scenes in novels, that's all really, you have to read to know how its written

I've also noticed that AI writing uses this weird comparison to describe everything, such as "he darted like a majestic bird atop the chinese mountains" or some stupid shit like this, and it is for almost everything. As someone who uses Grok to fix my chapter grammars, I've mastered the usage of...

people that like it will like it (me), and people that dont will not (not me)

what was the name of your fanfiction and what was it about? why not start with that

>go read a famous and popular royal road novel >expect unique stuff and original ideas that made it so loved and popular >its the most generic isekai i have ever read with literally every trope except harem 😐

what if I write God of Pirates: I kill berserkers for a Living

Helk

its probably the AI Chat bot they use to translate them. I never use em dashes but comas, but when I correct grammar the chat bot loves adding a million em dashes, like two or three times per paragraph

can you post your art here also just saying "look me up on insta and youtube" isnt good because you literally dropped no name for your social media accounts. and no, just duarvey doesnt give me any results, just random indian people

did dungeons only appear in America? lol

You can go to Webnovel, most stories there are 90% porn and 10% story!

I mean, yeah, if they've gone through tragedy, mistreated, and have suffered not just themselves but their families have also suffered then you could create a really great motivation to make a "dickhead with a heart" type of mc. I've written a few myself, though sometimes they are also literally...