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Thanks For Your Clear And Open Discipline.. I'll take it to Heart And Try My Best... I Appreciate Once Again.... He didn't actually crush me. He kind of corrected me of my actions and what I got wrong... Not everyone will commit their time to read the novel and write this long comment to tell...

Hello Everyone.. I would like to ask for a honest feedback for my novel, cause I don't think people like it that much.. So please tell me what you think https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1309554/fallen-paradise--systemlite-grimdark-horror-war-fantasy-litrpg-cultivation-story-/