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    Very bad free feedback thread.

    If you have time, please give my story a read! Thanks! Divinians | Scribble Hub
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    Envy's Free Feedback Thread [Thread Closed]

    Well, here's my story! Divinians | Scribble Hub
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    Corty's Feedback Corner (Kinda... Read the first post!) --- Open until further notice.

    Well, here's my story. I hope it's good! Divinians | Scribble Hub
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Well, here's my story. I hope it's good! Divinians - Bohe 1 | Scribble Hub
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    Share Your Storytime

    Do you have a storytime you would like to share? Feel free to share it here! I'll go first: When I was in elementary school, I had a friend named Connor. In case you don't know, we were in a special needs classroom, so he was autistic like me. However, we usually go to a normal classroom...
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    Free feedback thread.

    Oh, understood. Apologies for the misunderstanding. And thanks.
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    Grand Strategy Games?

    Not gonna lie, you have a good sense of humor. lol
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    Free feedback thread.

    Ah, I see. It's so odd how I originally thought what that meant, but I see your point now. I'm gonna have to change some stuff then. Thanks for the suggestion. Still, I will continue to post short chapters since I can't really dedicate to writing longer ones.
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    Grand Strategy Games?

    Yeah, I hear ya. I'm dealing with college right now, so yeah. It gets stressful sometimes.
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    Grand Strategy Games?

    Cool. You know, I mostly play HOI4 with cheats since I can't come to grips with the basics yet. I mean, I played the tutorial before, but it was still complicated for me. But at the same time, it gets boring pretty quick, so I'm trying to minimize my use of it.
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    Grand Strategy Games?

    Interesting. Can you recommend some easy countries to play as?
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    Grand Strategy Games?

    Oh, hey there. Yeah, the Total War games are fun. Such a shame that I don't play them as often as I used to, though. I've been meaning to try the Millennium Dawn mod. How complicated is it?
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    Free feedback thread.

    Hm, I see. Since you mention one of my chapters being read like a script, I don't really intend for my story to be that dialogue-heavy or not that it should look like that, anyway. You see, the reason I write my story in the present tense is because I want it to have that "filmmaking" type of...
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    Grand Strategy Games?

    So, you don't know? lol I see. I might give Three Kingdoms a try since I admire East Asian history a lot (or just Asian history in general). Cool. What's your favorite Total War game?
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    Grand Strategy Games?

    Nice, I used to play the Total War games back in the day when they used to be free for a limited time on Steam. As for Civilization, I have Civ6 for the PS4. To be honest, I suck at it sometimes. lol
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