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Thank you. I needed that haha. Then, sad ending is my thing now :)

I don't claim to be an expert, but I say stick with your vision. You know your story best, including how volume 4 should end. And if...

Currently, I am writing the ending of Volume 04. Almost all of the endings I wrote so far have been… sad. I don’t want to change the...

They are allowed. Not allowed are stories written by AI. This is, after all, a writing website, not an art one.

I’m going to explain why I not only feel this was written in ignorance of various situations, but also why I strongly disagree. take my...

I reached volume 03, and now it's a giant mess of chapters. we need grouping.

lol I work hard. Don't read all of them lol. Prologue + ch 1. vs Prologue + ch 46

Fifty two chapters. :blob_dizzy: I'll add it only my reading list. I'll get back to you about your request.

I want special feedback. Since I wrote three volumes, I want to see if I have ever improved. Two chapters from vol 1 and two from 3 to...

depends

As many suggested, you can't judge a book by its first chapter. So I waited until this time to request some feedback. I'm currently...

No problem man, thanks for the feedback again. Notes taken. and just to clarify they are not Invincible. I don't want the superman...

Im glad that was helpful. I worried about being too blunt to be useful. You've got a clear vision of murderous waifus. Stick with that...

Thank you so much for the honest review! you're right, i described them way too many times lol. I see that cruel girls is not your...

Aight, bet. Is there a reason you dislike putting more than one sentence in a paragraph? Not every sentence needs to be it's own...