Yeah :/
sometimes Sometimes I don't translate phrases well, since I come from Spanish
The confusing prologue is mostly intentional, since I'm inspired by novels and series like Re:Zero (in terms of writing style) and other stories that begin in the "future," to create interest and meaning...
You can check mine out! It's a light urban fantasy novel with touches of slice of life/mystery and psychological thriller.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2195893/tales-of-alba--the-sentenced-spy/
Hey! I'm an amateur author, and I've never had a review of my story before. I'm trying to write something good and original. It's called ALBA, and I have the story very well planned from beginning to end. I just need some feedback to see what I can improve.
This is the poster btw (What are...