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    New writing style feedback needed.

    I've been reading alot of warhammer books recently, mostly those written by Dan Abnet. Those kind of influenced me into actually improve my writing style. I really want to know if its noticably improved from the previous chapters I've released. If anyone is willing to spare a short moment to...
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    College writers and studies.

    Haven't plan on wheather to work in private or goverment but I will prepare myself for those 6-18 hours incase the choose the former. I mean, I already spend 6-14 hours of studying at home right now, so it shouldn't be THAT hard.
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    College writers and studies.

    I see what you mean...My brother actually finished his Bachelor's last year. And I just went into college this year, so the fees aren't too big. Plus, my father prepared himself after my middleschool years. But I get their struggles, college (especially privates) fee are ABYSMAL.
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    College writers and studies.

    I'm a med student. So, I hopefully won't be working in more than 1.
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    College writers and studies.

    I actually like this. I normally aim for atleast 750-1k words when i usually write. But it's hard to focus when you have your phone with you. consistensy is my main enemy, because I overgame or overstudy sometimes and leave no other room for writing
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    College writers and studies.

    It's been a while since I posted anything, let alone have the time to write anything. But since I'm coming back here, I wanted to ask. If there are any writers that go to college or even school. How do y'all balance your writing and studies? For me it's pretty unbalanced since by the time I am...
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    Is it worth going back to split up larger chapters?

    I am currently doing it right now, going back and redoing the chapters. Since you're writing about 4-7k words, I presume it has alot of scene/perspective changes? (If no then my apologies) Splitting a chapter works for me cuz my novel has alot of scene changes which (i think) readers would find...
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    Does a harem half to be romantic?

    No, Its only a harem if the women are in love with the mc and the mc with the women (can just me woman love mc but nonetheless).
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    New chapter feedback and advices.

    Hello! Im back FINALLY after my PC broke down due to electrical issues. Anyways, the new chapter of my (reworked) novel just dropped and I want to request some sincere feedbacks. I am trying to get better at writing tension and super fast action scenes, so abit of advices on those would really...
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    Thank you very much :D

    Thank you very much :D
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    Reworked chapter release

    After weeks of writing, I have decided to release the reworked version of the first chapter of my novel. Although the synopsis is still being worked on, may I kindly request a review on it. Helpful tips and critisisms would be much helpful. If you HAVE read the old chapter before, how is the...
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    Synopsis update.

    After much thinking, I have finally decided to rerelease my chapters. Starting with the synopsis, since it is the HARDEST part to write ngl. Here is the updated synopsis, tmk if there are anythings to change or how I could improve it: In the beginning, there was peace. Its Creator–The Word...
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    Delete or Edit, And, Split or nah?

    Good point. Then it is much better to re-release it. Since my exam finishes tmr, I shall focus of reworking each chapters. Thanks for the advices again. Much love <3
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    Delete or Edit, And, Split or nah?

    That is great advice. But also what I am (currently) stuck in is that I want to add stuff to the chapters but The additions are not going to be like THAT much, just a few extra scenes, some extend the plot.. But still, it is not THAT much that the whole chapter or how the story goes will change...
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    Writing Corty's Tip Jar

    Corty, my goat, just when i needed this.
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