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I see I'll focus on Aikos pov in the next chapters. The world structure is done and the path are already planned but the scene are not...

I see so the problem started in chapter 4. The main plot is AIKO travelling while and gradually introducing my world structure with...

Thanks. How do I call you tho.

That was really helpful. Tho I'd really like to know more about the other points I'd like to fix the paragraph and pov for now atleast...

I was supposedly a story teller so I think it's my pov, and there are times I used pov of characters I didn't consider but I think...

Thanks for the reminder I just found how to edit it hahaha

I attached the link. Feedback about weakness and strength, something lacking something need reinforcement

Heyo everyone, OrionVale here. I'm seeking advice and feedbacks for my first series with 6 chapter as prologue tho it felt long I want...

Post it in the feedback section. There you will find many that would help.

My post got take down maybe before I put like but here I am again OrionVale. I'm seeking advice and feedbacks for my first series with...