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My regret? I did worse than listen to their suggestions, I let my editors change my story. Back then, they wrote so much more than I had...

Waiting for the impact... the main conflict... to finally show up... I regret taking so long to get to the main action and letting the...

:blob_teary: Then you got ebil commenters~. :blob_reach:

How to Paragraph properly.

Alright, so you know that writing rule "show, don't tell"? There's a fancy term for the best tool to do that called the Objective...

No need to throw insults. Like if writing romance being heavy on details is important. Another thread suggested that 30000 words is...

It's actually understandable psychologically... why readers prefer chapters with short paragraphs (1-3 sentences). Since most readers...

Exactly. They are always looking for authors to harvest. The internet is the best place for this. More authors mean more organs.

I get what you are saying, on one end. Yeah, a lot of badly translated books. No doubt about that. As for the paragraph thing, most...

There are some of us who prefer to write for those who have retained something approaching reading comprehension. If your attention span...

Might be jumping in a bit late here, but... I mean, I can kind of see what you're saying, but I think you're also making a bit of an...