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I searched and didn't see it, but it's easier to add it to your signature when asking things related to your story. Link below for...

I've also been thinking about my synopsis recently. It's true from the perspective of the MC, and the story is written from this...

Atlatl

I play Stellaris 20 hours per sitting. It's a problem

It is decided by a room of shroom-eating chimps bashing a keyboard for an optimal result.

This is anecdotal, but I reorganized my early chapters and split them up significantly (from 16 to 60+). I was basically adding a...

Ty for the feedback and info, I set up a signature with the story link. But it's long, so I don't expect anyone to read it just to give...

Hi everyone, looking for a little feedback (significant spoilers below). From the beginning of my story (OP MC Isekai), I've been...

I'm quite new to writing, and I've already significantly edited early chapters. I try to improve on bad habits I catch, but in a year, I...

My older chapters tended to be heavy-telling. As my narrative skill improved, I became uncomfortable reading them. It's not that they...

I overused 'before' terribly. I meant it as a way to move from one action to another: "He did x before moving to y," or, "he said x...

But you lose out on so much self-deprecating humor doing that though. :blob_aww:

I really enjoy thinking about and writing my story. If I had 0 readers, I'd probably still work on it. Sometimes I'm tired and don't...

Frustration. I found myself getting annoyed at how characters in some of my favorite stories behaved. Then I thought about how I wanted...