Recent content by oldeststoryteller

Thanks for the reply and for reading my novel. This reply really has helped me understand Yeah, I have found that characterisation is definitely my weak point in writing, will try improve on that. Was going for the sense that they were forced to grow up a bit quicker, but it does seem they...

Thank you very much for the reply and for reading the story. I should have probably expanded a bit more on the details of it, I was a bit more focused on the character arc. To answer your question the test is more like a big exam, throughout your time in the Crimson Ascent Pavilion you are...

As the title says, I've just recently started writing after reading for a long time, and this is my first story. I think it's good, but which author doesn't think their own story is amazing? I would appreciate some honest feedback but I'm not so sure how this works so I ask for your patience...