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    Two different people in dialogue

    "Ocean- I want to see the ocean." "Aren't we going to the beach next Summer?" "I have 1 months left." "What about the promise?... Why!? Why didn't you tell me anything!?"
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    Favorite weapon?

    I like pistols- simple and effective.
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    Writing I need tips and tricks for writing combat scenes.

    I edit/rewrite my battle scenes several time as a novice writer. 1. Make sure that actions in the scene follow the rule of cause and effect. If the character goes brrrrt, super speed, group all effect and show it at the end. Even if the attack missed, you have to show the effect sometimes. 2...
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    Blatantly advertise. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/325650/crimson-vanguard/

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    Welcome thread for the newbies!

    Ohayo, OHAYO-desu! Pretty confusing, right?—Ohayo, Ohayo. I made this a SH account for a while, but have done nothing with it. I'm here because it's time for me to write a novel! This link isn't suspicious, so click here for free cookies. There are enough cookies for everyone. Come on~...
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