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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Bro. Buddy. There is literally no way to write fiction without saying something political in some way. You can only choose whether you make it explicit and honest, or whether you bumble around putting your foot in your mouth acting like your self-purported neutrality/non-partisanship is somehow...
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    I’ll work on the synopsis, but note that this is a story about resistance against power. And it is about *existential* resistance, not “I was sad called me a bad word” As far as the rest of the genderfucky thing? This is literally all based on Omegaverse stuff so I’m doing kind of a twist on...
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    The goal of the main cast is not to topple those who “disagree with them”. Keep in mind we’re talking specifically about those in power, not an entire culture. It’s to topple people who, in that world, are literally killing people like them, based on things they can’t actually change about...
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Honestly, I do appreciate you taking the time to read it! Tbh I mostly don't have more chapters out 'cause life happened and I got sick, but there's a couple in the queue that I'm still working on editing. As far as propaganda? I mean I think any good fiction is ultimately some kind of...
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Thank you for reading! This is great feedback! Yes I’ve started off pretty dense and have worked on easing folks into the world more, but the prologue is definitely the biggest shock to the system because it’s where the OAB system gets introduced (since it might otherwise be even harder to...
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Hi! Would you be up for checking out my silly project? It's the first time I've ever tried to write in earnest and I'm just... I guess learning the ropes, so any feedback helps. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1564651/fell-from-the-crows-nest
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    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    Thank you so much for this review! I'm genuinely so embarrassed that I missed the tense switches. I'm "trained" in screenwriting, so my instincts keep dragging me back to present tense even though I'm insisting on doing past tense for this. I have had to stomp out so many of these misses! The...
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    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    Dearest Gabrielle, I’m very new at actually writing anything but I think it would be absolutely the sweetest thing if your sweet self sweetly shared some tea with me over a few words I’ve been working on. I fear I might be a bit out of my depth but I figure getting others to tell me how stuff...
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    I’m ready to get rekt tbh https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1564651/fell-from-the-crows-nest NB: I don’t even use stuff like grammarly so no butlers in sight if it reads like that it’s just my writing being bad ?
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    Ask Stone or Ink for Feedback. (Closeddd)

    Could i ask for a Stone of my story? I've been really trying to put decent prose together, and also rolled up a lot of pretty serious topics. It's very very queer, very trans-y: There's basically no such thing as something that might even _look_ like "cishet" to us in this universe. Also I've...
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    Looking for feedback on improving my first work

    I'm really trying to work hard on being able to *write* prose I enjoy, as someone who likes stuff that reads fairly fancy. I genuinely don't know how some authors have some surreal word recall and their prose is so pretty and I want to work towards all that. So I'm working on something in...
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