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    first time writing a novel and i want opinions

    thanks a lot your points really helped me out i will do a whole revision regarding the earlier chapters soon! i will make them similar to the new ones that is actually my whole point im happy you saw it that way. thank you for taking sometime to read it and giving me your honest opinion <3
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    first time writing a novel and i want opinions

    thank you a lot for the input! i try to make the readers feel the situation as best as i can. regarding the writing it was my first time writing anything in English outside of university, so i make will sure to revise and edit the previous chapters when i am done with the canes horos arc <3...
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    first time writing a novel and i want opinions

    i am making an isekai novel that i believe to be original, long story short is the MC's city gets invaded by another world that can use magic and he manages to escape through their gate. of course he cannot use magic so he has to use everything at his disposal to survive, from his modern...
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    Plug your story badly!

    pursuing redemption in another world, the story is full of contradictions, hope core mixed with tragedy, the mc is weak against everyone since he can't use magic but strong at the same time if he used his modern knowledge and equipments of guns and an advanced futuristic armored truck he makes...
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