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thanks a lot your points really helped me out i will do a whole revision regarding the earlier chapters soon! i will make them similar...

thank you a lot for the input! i try to make the readers feel the situation as best as i can. regarding the writing it was my first time...

i am making an isekai novel that i believe to be original, long story short is the MC's city gets invaded by another world that can use...

pursuing redemption in another world, the story is full of contradictions, hope core mixed with tragedy, the mc is weak against everyone...