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I circumvent this problem by doing two sentences per paragraph

what i dont think so

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2082683/hellcore/

Thanks! I'll try to keep that in mind.

I was thinking about working on a new story. I need feedback or some ideas that would help. Criticism is welcomed. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1495884-a-speedrunners-guide-to-a-perfect-ending/chapter/1495903/

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1357227/cultivators-second-life-in-another-world/

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1357227/cultivators-second-life-in-another-world/

heres also mine if you want to swap https://www.scribblehub.com/dashboard/

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epic (y)(y)(y)(y)(y)

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/646791/i-can-copy-skills-with-a-system-in-another-world-litrpg-isekai/ thanks

Thanks for the feedback! I also notice that I have a couple of problems with my writing so the criticism is much appreciated.

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im talking about the masterpiece, of course.

story brought a tear to my eyes. what a masterpiece