Recent content by NotAUniquename4502

My chapter - first novel i'm seriously writing, looking for feedback to understand where as an aspiring author i could do better

A fellow man of culture I see

Harry Potter but he is actually transmigrated morbius

https://www.scribblehub.com/read/530098-assassins-apocalypse/chapter/538914/ Here is the updated link, after extensive rewriting. I'm sure its still not that good but hopefully it is a bit better. It also explains why his home is good

Oh yeah mb it was actually somebody else really sorry but could u review my book anyways? :) Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/530098-assassins-apocalypse/chapter/538914/

Oh yeah mb didnt realise it was a bad link here is proper link https://www.scribblehub.com/read/530098-assassins-apocalypse/chapter/538914/ Sorry if it doesnt work

I mean, you liked my post which said I would rewrite the story, in first person, and re submit it, so I assumed that was approval. I've thought about a plot which should last until the end of the tutorial as well, like you suggested. It is now in first person, with an updated description coming...

Ok. Rewriting is all done, I hope it is ok for a mediocre first try lmao Assassins Apocalypse

Cool, thanks for accommodating my request, I realised that I need to focus A LOT more on describing stuff

I mean, my premise doesnt even matter yet, considering it has 1 chapter rn and after feedback from other ppl, im changing it to first person, so if u havent read it, could u wait until i have rewritten it fully which should take a day or so

Cool thx for feedback. Obviously I'm a little disappointed but i understand where you are coming from and ill try to correct my story as much as I can do even with my bad writing. Thanks for taking the time out of your day to read my story, even if it was bad, because at this point, any and all...

umm this thread

Ngl its the first thing i have ever done outside of an english essay, so im just going along with what i want to do and hoping i dont screw up too badly and i dont expect it to do well This do be the story https://www.scribblehub.com/read/530098-assassins-apocalypse/chapter/538914/ The this do...

Ngl its the first thing i have ever done outside of an english essay, so im just going along with what i want to do and hoping i dont screw up too badly This do be the story

Ngl its the first thing i have ever done outside of an english essay This do be the story