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    First Chapter Analysis

    Hmmmm. That's not a bad idea, although I don't think I'll be doing anything that radical to an already published chapter. Still, something to keep in mind if I ever do a physical release or the like. ...I got to admit, I am curious. Is my story one you might continue reading? Pure curiosity.
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    First Chapter Analysis

    Thank you! That's honestly incredibly exciting to hear. Yeah, the length is... an issue I'm aware of, but it wasn't something I figured out a solution to. This is the fourth draft and it's still... chunky. And thank you for picking up that grammar issue. You stare at a chapter long enough...
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    Envy's Free Feedback Thread [Thread Closed]

    I'd love to see what you think of my first chapter, if you'd like to take a look. Feel free to discuss in the thread. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843307/ravenous-magics/
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    First Chapter Analysis

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843307/ravenous-magics/ If you're interested, I'd love some feedback! First original story, so I'm a bit nervous.
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