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Nevafrost replied to the thread Can you feel any tension?.Thanks! I actually needed some guidelines because I'm really amateur when it comes to writing tense scenes. Also, that guy kind of got...
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Ease the metaphors. There are too many, and since we are in Iris’s head, lines like these sound as if a narrator is speaking to the...
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:meowsip: Looks good. Formatting might be a tad cleaner. Also tone back on the metaphors.
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I really like the premise. If you're looking for more tension here, I'd recommend leaving out the internal thoughts/intentions of...
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So, this is my first time writing romance (I've never experienced love except for that one time when a stray cat willingly sat on my...
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Nevafrost reacted to Yawgmoth's post in the thread would you read the story if the main character had this lore? with
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i mostly read fanfictions lately (HP, Pokemon, Starwars, Warcraft, Jurassic Series and others). in general a fan of fantasy and sci-fi... -
Nevafrost reacted to Yawgmoth's post in the thread would you read the story if the main character had this lore? with Like.
def. interesting introduction. just not my genre in general, so most likely wouldnt follow his progression.
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people have too much trust in my goldfish memory...
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You like memes? Cause I do.
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:blob_neutral: So you saw them studying during class.
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From where I live. The ting was, we had essentially your kind of HSC exam, but people wanting to go medics had to get past the medical...
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:blob_reach: Anyway, do not worry. The matter little in the grand scheme of things. Only if you want to become a medical practitioner...