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I been told the same about "To be countinued'" and them told me I already make a cliffhanger for each chapters so why did I do that them said. About their relationship I already have a plan for that part with simple explanation later on in future but now I wanted to focus on Yuna in the game...

It's from anime from Onimai and I found many funny face similar to this in there. Anyway do you write any story by you own?

I mostly did everything by myself and for me this is for fun I do when I got time.

I see that's interesting, I will work on that part and how about the English like grammar and etc since English are my third language and each chapter take some time to make so I could correct any grammar mistake?

Basically just add something like cliffhanger or something or maybe make a neat closing for that chapter?

I write it based on light novel way tbh around 1000-1500 but less than 2000 words and I putting to be continued just so I could put where I end this chapter.

Hmm, after doing something about it I think my narrator pretty weak around "Show don't tell" since I unsure how to make this part plus I write in my first language first and then write it back into English slowly. For hook, right now not much could be changed for it but I will try do something...

Welp that's suck since I pretty much figure everything I could by myself without much knowledge plus English are my third language So I'n trying here.

So what do you think about others chapter?

Hohoho, your people in here come and review my story and I make sure I don't bite.(?) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/881683/elysian-online/https://www.scribblehub.com/series/881683/elysian-online/

Here since you want it and my English aren't my first language so go on. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/881683/elysian-online/https://www.scribblehub.com/series/881683/elysian-online/

Hello! I have a novel I made and I hope you can reveiw it. English is not my first language but my third language because people here know at least 3 languages... so I'm sorry if my English is strange...

My height are around 1.86M but I still need to look up when talking with my Chinese friend who are 2.12M.

Wut?

How about for people who using the AI to translate their mother language that rarely heard into English so others could read it with context?